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Writing 201: Elegy – Fog

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Once it was a lovely bright palace

Your precious radiant smile

We danced with the trees, sharing laughter

The sunshine hugs, the warmth

 

All is blurred now, covered by the endless grey

The pieces of broken glass in my heart

I stand still, deep breathing may help, useless

The fog will always haunt me

 

It’s so late, but this is my poem for the Writing 201 Day 5 Assignment: Elegy – Fog – Metaphor. I don’t know much about the Elegiac Couplet, and not sure whether it meets the requirements of the assignment or not. 😀

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